Changes made to Chihiro's BD script for sgt v2.

  • E01
    • Added missing fonts: Paint Drops, Retrosynthwave.
  • E02
    • 00:57: Chihiro replaced "stitch" with "stich", but I believe the former is more correct here so I reverted the change.
    • 03:27: italicized thought.
    • 11:09: Chihiro replaced "ceremonial hall" with "ceremonial hill", but as per the LN and manga it's a hall, and they even visit it later in this anime. I don't know why this was changed. Reverted to "hall".
    • 21:52: italicized thought.
  • E03
    • 13:22: maybe debatable but I still think it's a thought; italicized. This isn't the sort of line one would say aloud in this situation.
    • 20:01: italicized thought.
    • 20:04: italicized thought.
  • E04
    • 20:23: "gem's" typo again; I rewrote the line to not mention them (since they had already been brought up earlier in the coversation) and to not name the city (Garm) again.
  • E05
    • 14:27: italicized thought.
  • E06
    • 06:59: italicized thought.
  • E07
    • 07:45: "I 've" to "I've"
  • E08
    • 05:08: italicized thought.
    • 06:11: italicized thought.
    • 06:14: italicized thought.
    • 14:53:
      • WEB: Why, if it isn't Momo!\NWhat a weird place to reunite!
      • BD: Why, if it isn't Momo!\Fancy meeting you here!
      • Chihiro updated this line to not need the linebreak but then left the backslash; I removed it.
  • E09
    • 08:08: debatable, italicized thought.
    • 08:25: italicized thought.
    • 08:57: across the entire show's dialogue this is the only instance of (U+2019) being used; replaced with a regular ' (U+0027) for consistency.
  • E10
    • 12:01: title sign bleeds into next scene, I snapped it to keyframe.
    • 12:07: title sign bleeds into next scene, I snapped it to keyframe.
    • 14:20: I rewrote this line because I felt it was already meh in the WEB release and it was only worsened in the BD release.
  • E11
    • no changes.
  • E12
    • no changes.
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Pub: 21 Nov 2023 22:18 UTC
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