In the Heat of the Crimson Queen

by Power of Alchemy

Wanted to rework this because I can hardly look at the original without cringing. Still not really where I want it, but it's certainly a lot better.

Be Anon, suburban middle class guy with an average job

Not poor but not exactly rich either

You live alone in a rather nice apartment

It’s about one o’clock Sunday today, and all you’ve been doing so far is sleeping

But Vivian, a good friend of yours, just called suddenly after a few weeks of silence

She’s an anthro fox, just the basic orange, white, and black

The common colors, although her cousin supposedly has a pretty funky coat

You’ve known her since you were young

It’s astounding that you’re still good friends with her after all this time

And it’s relieving that she contacted you, you were starting to get worried

You texted her a few times prior, but she didn’t respond at all

And it’s been an even longer time since you last saw her in person

That’s in the past, though

You walk up to her apartment and knock on the door

When it opens, you see Vivian for the first time in nearly a full month

She looks like she hasn't left the house in days

Her winter coat looks ruffled up under her Weezer shirt and black spandex shorts

Seems bit strange for a lazy Sunday afternoon, but you were never much a fashion guy yourself

Her hazel eyes squint in the sunlight, trying their best to get used to it

"Hey, how's it going? Haven’t hung out in a while, huh?" She says, in what sounds like her best attempt to mask physical pain

”Yeah, how’re you doing”

"Uh, i've been alright, kinda" She responds with

You walk into her house and holy shit it's cold in here

Given her fluffy coat, you expected her house to not be as warm as yours

But you didn’t expect it to be so freezing

"Heh, sorry for the temperature. I know you don’t tolerate cold like I do, I’ll go raise the thermostat”

Uh-huh

The door opens to her living room, which has an old couch and a shitty TV which (as far as you’re aware) is almost never used

"Let’s head to my room, I have all the games in there"

Her bedroom was only a few feet away from the front door

It’s significantly warmer in here

And sweaty

She bends over to turn on the console on the floor

You try not to look her behind when she does that

The spandex isn’t helping

As good of an ass as she has, you don’t wanna come off as a creep

Even if she can’t see your actions

She gets up and turns back around, holding two controllers

And of course, the TV turns on to some fighting game

Called “The Last of the Line 3”

You have no idea what it’s about, but the men are ripped almost to a comical extent and most of the women have barely any clothes on

Vivian's been a huge fan of the fighting genre since she was little

And not much seems to have changed

She constantly brags about having over 7,000 hours clocked in across all games

Way too much in your opinion, but she doesn’t seem to have turned into one of those slobs who only plays those games and doesn’t take care of themselves

As long as she doesn’t turn into that, you’re not gonna judge her too much

The game starts

You pick a burly looking bear character, and Vivian chooses a human guy with green skin

You have no clue what’s happening, you’re just pressing buttons

It’s working, though

Although even if you’re not familiar with the game, you know she’s playing noticeably more poor than she usually does

She’s not even like this when she goes easy on you

And you even manage to win a game

She congratulates you, but she looked less and less interested in the game as it goes on

She’s distracted by something

After a few more rounds, she stretches and says, “Can we take a break? I need to recharge so I can stop losing"

Uh-huh

She moves to turn the console off as you recline against the wall on her bed and realize just how sweaty it is

It was unnaturally hot in here when you first entered

But it’s gotten so much worse after a while

After Vivian changes, TV is changed to some random channel, she crawls up next to you

The TV shows a sitcom, given the canned laughter, but you’re too distracted by Vivian to tell which it is specifically

She’s a bit too close for your comfort, having her head leaning on your shoulder

And she’s subtly moving closer and closer to your chest

After a particularly loud laugh track following a man jumping off a moving truck, Vivian suddenly turns and climbs on top of you

Her head leans into your chest, and you’re fairly certain she’s sniffing you

And she’s just laying there

”Uh, Viv-“

"Shh... just let me enjoy this"

Really weird... but you kinda find it cute at the same time

She’s making small, barely audible whimpers as she cuddles up against you

The whimpers slowly get more and more loud as her head moves closer to your face

Uhh

At first it was cute, but now it's starting to get really weird

Too weird for someone you’ve considered a friend your whole life

You're already sweating a lot, but she’s accelerating it

Her intense cuddling and body heat isn’t helping at all

It’s kinda hot, in a sexual way

You feel yourself start to get hard

Fuck, this is awkward

Still hot though

"Aren’t you hot in this getup? C’mon, cool down a little" She says as she unzips your jacket

Yeah, you are actually

You can lose the jacket

And maybe roll up your sleeves as well

"You must be hot in those pants too"

Okay what the fuck

What’s even more fucked up is you not even protesting as she unzips your pants and pulls them down

Your best friend that you’ve known since elementary school is now cuddling up against your shoulder, while you're in your boxers

In a hot room, while sweating profusely

If this was years ago, and she was spending the night at your house over the weekend or something, you’d suspect nothing

But you’re both in your mid twenties now

It’s hard to describe, but there’s a difference between friends sitting close to each other stripped to undergarments and watching some random show

That’s what good childhood friends do, right?

You’ve only ever done this with Vivian

Maybe you just never picked up on the sexual tension until now

Hm...

She adjusted herself again, and now she’s straddling you

She’s not even trying to hide it

Those shorts pressed against your erection

Her breasts pressed against your chest

Fuck, you better say something

Uhh

Uhh

Uhh

What do you say?

Reject her? Talk dirty? You’ve never done this before

Rejecting her could end this all and likely preserve the friendship, but this is the closest you've been to sex

It would make this really awkward as well

Talking dirty could enhance the mood

But you’ve never done it before! Should you just follow what they do in porn?

C’mon, think Anon, think!

Your rambling thoughts are interrupted by her leaning in and whispering something to you

”I need you, anon"

Fuuuuck

You can feel her grinding against you now

Porn never prepared you for this

Okay, you gotta say something now to seal the deal

Your mind races with words to say, eventually stuttering out something

”Let me take your wheel, angel” you say with your best attempt at a smug smile

...

One of her ears flattens a bit and she puts on a quizzical look, “...What?"

FUCK

You had one chance you say something and you fucked it up

You tried saying four different pickup lines at once

Her confident and lusty visage is broken by your awful line

You stutter out a few more incoherent sounds before she shushes you with her finger

"Shh, it's okay. I'll take the lead, I guess"

You seemingly ruined the mood, for both you and her

Even, even as she's pulling your boxers down and grasping your cock, you can't get back into the moon

You could've tried just kissing her and not saying anything

That was actually a good idea

Fuck, why didn't you think of that?

She leans in and gives your member a long lick

It feels good

...Yeah

She’s giving you a blowjob now, or what she interprets as one

She’s taking barely any of it, and her teeth are kind of painful against the head of your penis

What do you even say

It feels so quiet in here, but it isn’t

You can hear her trying to suck you off

As well as the TV in the background, which up to this point, you tuned out of

The sitcom is the same, one of the characters, an anthro coyote girl seems to be trying to fight off a man in a wheelchair

The laugh track is going off every five seconds, which certainly makes your current situation a whole lot worse

It feels like a crowd of people are watching you have sex

After a while, she stops

She crawls closer to you and hovers her cooch over your hips

She has a look of uncertainty on her face

"Here goes..."

Your cock enters her

You did it

You’re not a virgin anymore, but at what cost?

Your friendship?

Your dignity?

A chance at a relationship with her?

Well, maybe not that

She’s slowly inserting it into herself deeper and deeper

Fuck, it's tight

Her visage of an experienced sex haver is long gone

You’re unsure of what to do now

Hug her? Is that what you do during sex?

You raise your hands and place them on her hips as she shakily starts to move up and down

She’s moaning and whimpering, but you can't help but stay completely quiet

It just… feels off

Is this what years of jacking off almost daily does to you?

Eventually she stops and puts a concerned look on her face

"Everything alright, Anon? Do you want me to stop?"

”Uh, no but- I’m mean it’s-“

Her face changes from a concerned look to a soft smile

As you continue stuttering, she places a finger over your mouth and makes a shushing sound

"It’s alright we don't need to rush things.” She says

She removes herself from you and cuddles up under your chin

"I may be in heat, but I haven't lost self-control. I can wait a few more hours"

She moves up to your lips for a kiss

You stay silent in an attempt at not fucking it up this time

Her lips meet yours

Her wet nose brushes against your face as you two meet lips

It was, admittedly, a bit awkward given her snout, but still

You don't want this to end

Eventually she pulls away, leaving a trail of saliva as she does

You both sit and stare at each other in silence

But this time, it isn't awkward

It feels like this is an embrace

Like her eyes are pulling you into a warm hug

She smiles

"C’mon. let's go try something else, we can save this for later"

”But isn't she still in heat?”

"Yeah, and it still burns, but I’ll save myself for when you're ready"

That made you feel warm inside, and a bit excited at what’s to come

You both clothe yourselves and sit back on her bed

The sitcom is still going on, the coyote girl is now downing a whole bottle of vodka in the middle of a desert

"Sorry if I rushed things. I just couldn't take the heat anymore, and sorry if I forced myself upon you" she says, staring at the screen as if she’s scared to look at your reaction

”Nah, it’s fine. At least our friendship wasn’t ruined”

She doesn’t say anything, but puts on a soft smile in response

You spend a few minutes just laying and cuddling with her while watching the (admittedly pretty funny) show, but there was still one thing nagging you about all this

”Hey, why didn’t you act like this in previous years” You ask her

”Heat suppressants, but I decided not to take them this time. Getting good cheap suppressants for my species is hard this late into heat season”

Huh

She eventually gets off you and says, "Anyway, let's go listen to some Weezer. I have their whole discography except Raditude on CD."

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Pub: 18 Jul 2021 03:19 UTC
Edit: 18 Jul 2021 08:53 UTC
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