To Alice

https://rentry.org/Ambrosio-IV
https://rentry.org/Federigo-Strozzi

I am banned for a week Alice, so please write your next chapter or two without me. I trust you to make it interesting so I am giving you full freedom since I know you will be good with my culture and peoples. I would be delighted even if you added on to some of mine in a way that makes sense. Have fun!

Good work Alice, It was a nice slice of life chapter and it made me laugh. I loved it. Great improv by creating characters, I loved the old man, and I loved the whole breaking in saga. Excellent work as usual.

Yes that would be a big breach of trust and is an appropriate reaction from both interested to see what happens.

I love it Alice, it is a beautiful. I will give you better feedback soon. Not entirely what I envisioned with her but it works better actually!

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Pub: 08 Oct 2022 15:39 UTC

Edit: 16 Oct 2022 18:03 UTC

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