1st commission

1st panel with the shota talking: Can you change that so the shota talks to the blonde girl instead? I think there was misunderstanding and you made it exactly like here https://imgbox.com/Y5bNNxja. I just wanted to show that picture as an example about how big the panel can be. Make it so the blonde girl waves the shota goodbye. She should also wear this clothing in this panel. https://imgbox.com/1iPOU5XK. If it counts as a seperate outfit though, you can just use the same clothes here https://imgbox.com/urHKsF3P but with her shirt and jaket closed

2nd panel (main picture)

  • dont forget the hairbow and hairband https://imgbox.com/zC1uiniy
  • make her belly / gut a bit smaller make it around this size https://imgbox.com/6zpXmE4g (so you can see a bit more of the pubic hair too)
  • can you make it so the girl's face is more foward facing so can see the other side her face? you can just make their tongue connect if it interfers with the kissing.
  • you can draw her santa bra on her bed
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Pub: 03 Jan 2024 23:39 UTC
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